Example of Hortatory Exposition

People shouldn't Share Their Problems

In Social Network

Thesis  : Sharing problems in social network really annoys to other people and embarass themselves who do it.

Argue1: Firstly, people who share their problems in social network really annoys to other people. In Facebook and Twitter, there are many unstable teenagers who post their problems here. Here’s an example....

“I’m so sad. Nobody cares with me. My parents never think about me. They just think about money, money, and money.”

Social network is not about share the problem like this. As a user of social network, I feel like they are disturbing my vision with their status. I wanna see news from people updates, but when they use it for sharing their problems, it’s annoying.

Argue2: Not only annoys to other people, sharing problems in social network embarass themselves. With posting like what I show before, people think that the person who posted it has a terrible life. And it shows us that the person isn’t polite enough. It just makes us think that the person is bad. And it embarrasses her/himself.

Recommended: Finally, I strongly agree that people shouldn’t share their problem in social network. It’s better for them to write their feeling in a book which called diary or they just have to share it with their friends. Because if share their problems in social network, every people who is online will know the bad side of them.

English task

HOTLINE NEWS

Some students of SMA Negeri 2 Bogor complained about the facility of their school. Some classes didn’t get some facilities such as the air conditioner, computer, internet, etc. That was all happened because of the electrical problem. The students felt hot and they couldn’t concentrate with the lesson that they learned about. They had complained to their teacher etc, some classes moved to the in front of teacher’s room. But some classes still studied at that area. Not only the students, the teachers were also complained about this. They couldn’t teach the students as perfect as they want. They couldn’t use the projector to show the student about the material who had already made a presentation for that. On Wednesday, March 02, 2011, the electrical workers came to SMA Negeri 2 to fix the electrical problem. All of the students hope that it’ll be success and they can use the facility as they want.

Shabrina Tri Andini, X-1 (30)

The Impact of The Second World War

The impact of the second world war, I think it was so tragic. World War II has caused huge losses to both countries involved in war or not. The biggest disadvantage is making millions of people died caused by the war atrocities. The other side of the world who didn’t follow the war had experienced substantial losses. They would feel worried and scared about that. The economy, politic etc would be destroyed. The victory of the allies (Britain, France, the United States and the Soviet Union) in the second world war was helped by the US (equipment, soldiers, weapon) that could accelerate the end of the war with the Allied victory in hand. World War II had destroyed the hegemony of the big countries like Britain, France,Spain, and Portugal who had for centuries in control of power in various parts of the world. The occurrence of World War II are not directly influence the political life of Indonesia's independence movement. In 1942 Japan defeated the Netherlands, the DutchIndonesian position was taken over by the Japanese. This means that Indonesiabegan being colonized by Japan. The period of Japanese occupation runs about 3.5years. Various policies of Japan in Indonesia aimed at strengthening military power. In addition to supporting the Allied victory in the face. World War II was also influential inachieving independence of Indonesia.