PERNIKS

Are you guys knowing what Perniks is?

Perniks means Pergelaran Seni Kreasi Smanda.

And in this year, my lovely class XI Social 2 presented a story which written by me and other friends titled 

"PRINCESS"

The story is about love. There were 5 princesses and a girl named Bawang Putih. They snatched a boy named Jaka Tarub. And in the end Bawang Putih was with Jaka Tarub and the princesses were with Kabayan, Jaka's friend.

And in this story, I acted as Cleopatra. Cleopatra was a host in Cinderlayla's birthday party.

THIS IS ME WITH MY CLASSMATE

AND THIS IS ME AS CLEOPATRA WITH MULAN (NURUL FAZRY)

PICTURE

THIS IS ME WITH DRIVE

AND THIS IS ME WHEN I BECAME A HOST WITH DERYANSHA AZHARY

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Untalented

I don't have to introduce myself anymore. Cause you all know who I am.

I'm an ordinary girl which full of spirits and wishes.

I'm just an untalented girl who was born on 1994.

Now I'm 17. In this 17, I feel like many differences of life.

Have you ever felt like nobody appreciates what you've done?

Or maybe people see you by what you've done. Not what you've been through?

It just... suck.

I've ever joined some competition and the jury acted like they made me drop.

I just hate it. So much. Who don't hate if there are people said that your life is messy just because you don't have any talents like anybody else?

Should I do what you want? Can that thing makes me success someday? Are you the one who make a destiny of my life? I wanna mad but I still appreciate them.

"Hey you, the woman and men. Read this. This is for ya.
So now, I'm an untalented girl.

I just can do a lil beat box, make some quotes, make some stories, become a host, make people smile and laugh, and lil acting.
Once more, my life is messy and I'm untalented.
Don't try to ask some helps from me.

Accept me from who I am. Not what I got."

For the readers,

Keep smiling and enjoying this life! :)
This isn't for ya but for those people :p

Example of Hortatory Exposition

People shouldn't Share Their Problems

In Social Network

Thesis  : Sharing problems in social network really annoys to other people and embarass themselves who do it.

Argue1: Firstly, people who share their problems in social network really annoys to other people. In Facebook and Twitter, there are many unstable teenagers who post their problems here. Here’s an example....

“I’m so sad. Nobody cares with me. My parents never think about me. They just think about money, money, and money.”

Social network is not about share the problem like this. As a user of social network, I feel like they are disturbing my vision with their status. I wanna see news from people updates, but when they use it for sharing their problems, it’s annoying.

Argue2: Not only annoys to other people, sharing problems in social network embarass themselves. With posting like what I show before, people think that the person who posted it has a terrible life. And it shows us that the person isn’t polite enough. It just makes us think that the person is bad. And it embarrasses her/himself.

Recommended: Finally, I strongly agree that people shouldn’t share their problem in social network. It’s better for them to write their feeling in a book which called diary or they just have to share it with their friends. Because if share their problems in social network, every people who is online will know the bad side of them.